Draft essay 2-02b: My favorite place

I’ll tell you about my favorite place. My favorite place is my parents house. And also I’ll tell you my favorite places in my parents house. First, my favorite place in my parents house is my room. Second, my favorite place is my younger brother’s room. Third, my favorite place in my parents house is bath room.

My favorite place is my parents house because my father, my mother and my younger brother live there. I love them very much. I live alone now so I want to see them than ever. And I never feel lonely about family but I started to live alone, I feel a little like that. Now, I want to live with them.

In my parents house, my favorite place is my room. My room is so big. My room has Western style and Japanese style. The style is half and half. I like this style. My room has a big mirror. My hobby is dancing so I could watch my dance motion. I was a member of dance club and I went to dance studio. I could practice whenever I wanted to. Sometimes, my mother came to my room to watch my dance. And I talked together. My room has big bed. However I was so tired, I could relax on the bed. There are many closet in my room. So many clothes could into the closet. My room's wall is white. I like white and my room looks like Western room. The room makes me comfortable.

One of my best places in my parents house is my younger brother's room. We used to make CD on computer together. We like Western music and my family like it, too. I and my younger brother chose best musics and made CD. And then, all of my family listen to the music in the car when we go out together. In my younger brother's room, we used to talk about many things until my mother prepared dinner. I liked this time so I like my younger brother's room. And we watched fashion magazines together. I and my younger brother love fashion so we could talk together for many hours. I like the time.

Bath room is my favorite place in my parents house. I like bath time and the time is most important time for me in a day. While I take a bath, I read books, listen to the music and so on. My father take a bath for twenty minutes, it is so short for me. My mother take a bath for one hour. She likes to take a bath but it is little short for me. My younger brother take a bath for thirty minutes. But I take a bath for two hours. They always asked me to hurry up and short my bath time because they can't take a bath.

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